During the group Crits session we looked at everyones work and spent time analysing each piece and providing suggestions. I felt this part of the session just as helpful as the criticisms of my work. It was good to see how other people had approached their projects and this gave me a couple of ideas myself.
After explaining my project I received some feedback, some positive and some negative. The pieces of advice and ideas I think i will build upon are the two in the middle on the images shown above. I need to think about taking away from the letters and modifying them subtly rather than adding a lot to them. I should also simplify it by taking one aspect of domestic life and focusing on this. At first i felt this was too simple but I am now starting to think that it may mean that I produce a better more concise outcome.
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